Ms. Edwards: My Class Home Page

 

 

 

 

 

 

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What's new?

 

A few new people:

 

Lloyd Olson, Superintendent

 

 

Lisa Spear, Kindergarten

 

 

Sue Anderson, Second Grade

 

 

 

Michelle Covington, Counselor 

 

(picture soon)

 


What's Up?

 

 5B's

 

 

Reading Everywhere

 

 

See you Tuesday, September 2nd, at school for the barbeque at 5:00 p.m.

 


 

And, what about Writing Class?

 

 

A quick introduction to our goals and expectations:

 

 

http://www.trintuition.com/msedwards/msedwards

 

 

What to know more about a wiki?  Click here: http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Read-Me

 

Why a wiki?  Click here: http://whatelse.pbwiki.com/Learning-With-Wikis

 

Want to know more about Web 2.0 and the world your students are already living in?  Click here: Learn About Web Two Point O

 

 

to a great new year at school ![2]

 



 

 Welcome Back to Ms Edwards's Home Page

 

 

to the Home Page for 5-8 Writing and 8 Reading.  This page directs students to their online resources.

The sidebar (at right) links to lesson plans and other resource pages.  The resources the students need currently,

however, are listed below.

 

Please visit our new wiki: What Else?

What else could we:

  • write about
  • explain
  • describe
  • delete
  • brainstorm
  • research
  • revise

 

Writing is never done; there's always another word that would be more exact or engaging.  I rewrote that sentence twice already! A first draft finds our thoughts and stirs our imagination, but it's often not clear, detailed, or organized.  A writer looks at each section, and asks, "What else?"  So our new site is dedicated to the wonderful words we will write this year, as we ask each other, What else?

 

 

 

 

 

Live to make the world less difficult for each other.

~ George Eliot

 

 

 The following links connect to our current lessons, class writing, resources, etc.

 

 One page for our multi-linked classroom!


 


 

Note:  This Page: http://msedwards.pbwiki.com

 

Contact Me:  ms_edwards@mac.com


 

Lesson Information

 

 


 

Class Links

 

Coyote Talks

What Else

Collaborative writing places for us.

Permission required.

 

Resources

Ms. Edwards's original Web 1.0 (meaning noninteractive) website with many links and resources for each class.

 

Theme

Review how we capture the theme of our writings.


Current Lessons

 

 

All Classes

 

 

Literary Elements

 

Figurative Language

 

Download:  Figurative+Language.doc

 


 

Grade 8

 

TBA

 


Grade 7

 

 TBA

 


Grade 6

 

 TBA

 


Grade 5

 

TBA

 


Writing Expectations

 

Turn in all drafts and prewriting.

The final draft must include:

Complete Ideas (lost of specific details)

Logical Organization (beginning, middle, end; written in paragraphs)

Wonderful Word Choice (specific words--nifty nouns, vivid verbs; figurative language)

Super Sentence Fluency (complete sentences with some short and some long; sentences start in different ways)

Vibrant Voice (the writing shows you are committed to and care about the topic; no one else would write this because your personality shines through)

Correct Conventions (correct spelling, punctuation, paragraphing, capitalization, grammar, margins, legibility)

 

If completed online on a wiki page, remember to follow wiki rules and (to show all your thinking, from prewriting, draft, to final text):

Create new page with appropriate heading.

Do prewriting.

Write a draft.

Copy draft.

Paste above draft, then revise the draft.

Edit.

Email page link to teacher.

 

 


 

Alternative Credit Lessons

 See Writing Expectations above to receive credit.

 

1. Story Ideas

 

How to Write a Scary Story

R. L. Stine How to

 

Make a story cube: your own or for a book you are reading.

Story Cube

Planning Sheet: Download on the site above (it's underlined)

 

Create a story map of your characters, setting, problem, resolution.

Story Map

 


 


 

Tools

 TOOLS FOR YOU

 

 

 Thinkfinity Search Tool for Students: 

http://www.thinkfinity.org/StudentHome.aspx

 

 

Visual Thesaurus

 


About Ms. Edwards

 

 


 

 

 

Footnotes

  1. July 4th Pictures by Nancy Armstrong-Montes; School pictures by Sheri Edwards; sunflower photo by Sheri Edwards
  2. Welcome image from: http://www.animationfactory.com/en/


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